More and more students choose to go to another country for their higher education. Do you think the benefits outweigh the problems associated with it?
Nowadays, studying abroad has become more and more popular among the students who want to pursue academic education. In my opinion, while this trend causes some problems for foreign learners, I believe that studying in another country actually bring a lot more benefits.
To begin with, several issues may occur when people choose to stay in another country for higher education. The first and utmost problem that many students are facing when they approach new learning environment is the difference in culture and lifestyle. Many newcomers find it difficult to socialize with the local students, which usually leads to disappointment and depression in the first several months. In addition, language barrier is another difficulty for foreign students. It seems that many individuals cannot fully understand and comprehend the lectures, and fail their examinations consequently regardless to any language preparation efforts at home.
On the positive perspective, the benefits that students gain are far greater than the hardship they are dealing with when studying in another country. Firstly, while it is quite difficult at first, the situation will get better if students show persistence and determination. After some time adapting to the new learning environment, the students’ confidence, which is the most important and valuable quality for future career, will be improved significantly. Secondly, studying abroad give people enormous opportunities to practice their second language. The continuous exposure to native speakers gives students an immersive experience to vastly improve their language proficiency.
In conclusion, while several problems may occur when students choose to study in another country, I believe the benefits this trend offers definitely outweighs its associated issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78358208955 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92679108188 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615671641791 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5867683161 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.230769231 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32362918126 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101580583002 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748668920463 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189833648578 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465488929017 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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