The most important function of music is that helps people reduce stress or relaxing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Music is often considered an integral form of enjoyment. It addresses our psychological, mental, and spiritual needs, making us relaxed. In my opinion, music has a number of other positive effects aside forms, so I disagree with this argument.
Admittedly, there are some arguments in favor of music makes peoples is relaxing. First, music for this life are believed is the important part and also is a job among people life regardless of their family background. This music support, presumably tends not only to increase the overall psychological people feel comfortable after a long day at work or school but also to mitigate their feelings of inferiority by negative things outside of society, which eventually promotes an happiness society. Second, music just makes people feel relaxing would probably energizing during period of depression , he or she would have an uplifted mood. In fact, it is acknowledged that music is imperative to foster energy and makes people reduce stress in any nations.
On the one hand, music not only helps reduce stress, but also a place of creativity, talent, and messages. First, music can make people doing other things. Nowadays, people often use music as a message that the musicians has sent to someone or society, meaning that these would be input to develop other important areas such as the healthcare systems and international relationships. Second, music not only music but also in many others forms including the author’s feelings in the song or show interesting in music pursuits, thereby symphony can doing anything or any part of life can be summed up in a song and potentially that these music lover could have many interesting things about music. It, instead, would be a more music argument viable option if the resources were focused on researching many things about music but only believed that is a healing tool.
I were discussed both sides of the argument. In my perspective, I don’t agree with this argument.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: energize
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Message: Did you mean 'this music' or 'these musics'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09259259259 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.756747934 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577160493827 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.1167608382 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241016401605 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085784269324 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535675489005 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121552492501 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677656105073 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.