Due to the economic development and the overwhelming change in the way we live, people are becoming passive when we want to maintain a work-life balance. Unluckily, only a few people can put themselves in a desirable position where they can simultaneously take care of their family and lead a decent life with a medium-to-high paid job. In this essay, I will look at some problems people might facing, and propose solutions to overcome them.
Let us start by looking at the demerits of choosing work over other elements in life and vice versa. First of all, couples known as DINKs (double income no kids) may seemingly have a better life as they can earn more and enjoy greater freedom than those who have kids. However, it is highly probable that there would be a strain in the interpersonal relationship as a lack of devotion of their time to building a family. In contrast, when the mother decides to quit her full-time job to focus on her traditional responsibilities, such as: taking care of the kids, cleaning the house, doing dishes, etc. or enjoying her own leisure time, these factors have slowed down the accumulation of wealth. In this case, there would be a domestic conflict within the family, especially if the father is experiencing some financial problems.
The question is how to get through all of these problems that might occur? The best solution is for a person who has the capability to earn money to keep working, even they might have kids in later life. Simultaneously, the housewives or househusbands can take up a full-time or part-time job, but it should not take out too much time and health. For example, the husband, who is the breadwinner, makes sure to provide for the family, while his wife can work at home to earn some cash for the daily necessities. It is the main duty for the wife to take good care of the kids and her husband.
In conclusion, being able to keep our life on track is indispensable, whether sometimes it is hard to be done. The solution is we should let the one who do best to do their job, and their partners can play a role in other parts of lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6170212766 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74602061973 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582446808511 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5270413249 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115885700372 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388393945882 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481280477665 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770827696099 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573637706556 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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