Best education planning is always been an important factor for a healthy and successful nation. Recently many schools are planning to replace teaching session with sports and exercise classes. In my opinion it is an excellent change which will have very good long term effects. There are many strong reasons for this believe. This essay will explain these benefits with examples.
One of the main benefit of this change is that it is better for health of children to attend more physical activity classes. For a healthy mind a healthy body is very important. With the advent of technology kids are mostly spending their time on computers and internet. This change in attitude has caused a lot of health problems. One of major issue is obesity at younger age. Children has all games and activities on computers and mobile phones. Beside obesity there are many other health issues like heart problem, hearing issues and strokes has been noticed at quite younger age. It is very good thought to make students to attend work out classes more then before. For example , in Canada curriculum physical education class is a compulsary course in primary and secondary school level. Every school in North America has large and fully equipped gyms. Due to these changes kids are involving more in games and outdoor activities.
Another reason in favor of this view is that these subjects will improve overall performance of children. There are many educational games and supports too. Children can learn many important aspects of life. Playing different supports can create good teamwork and cooperation. It is a good way of creating confidence and sportsman ship in children. These all positive effects will help to build strong and healthy nation.In developed countries there are many job oppertunities for players. this way many children choose sports as their carrier.
So in my opinion it is a very positive change and it will help to develope a strong nation and successful country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, then, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09785932722 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50417371709 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54128440367 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.84076855 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.4583333333 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.625 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273015574947 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733246397358 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609028098373 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162724267052 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494928877838 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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