A new shopping center is going to open in your town. at present, nobody knows what kind of shops or facilities are going to be provided for customers. what shops and facilities would you like to see made available to the shopping public? give reasons for your answer and make useful suggestions for the shopping center’s management.
The significance of shopping facilities which was always debatable has now become more contentious with many people claiming that it is beneficial, while others disagree. In my opinion, the advantages of new shopping mall are a more logical. This essay will explicate how management will provide some useful facilities to the customers in the looming paragraphs.
Analyzing the statement and explaining further, the first and most important benefits of the shopping mall is that free home delivery to the customers. If management makes door to door free service, customers will buy more from the shops Another striking advantage in this regard is that online service for the shopper to purchase different types of consumers from online and pay by any bank cards. In categorizing this, it cannot be over looked that the main benefit for this is that, getting daily needs from home by shopping malt huge opportunities to time consume
Moving forward, one of the main underlying reason stems from the fact that it is important to mention that authority should provide different types of items for buyer to buy. From one place. Furthermore, top up all bills from shop, would be great advantage for shoppers. Moving on, itis clear why many people are in favor of the shopping facilities from new center in their own town.
In conclusion, according to the arguments mention above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of shopping mall are indeed too great. Thus, I believe that management should take more steps for customers to making good shopping.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: OVER_LOOKED[1]
Message: Did you mean 'overlooked'?
Suggestion: overlooked
...rds. In categorizing this, it cannot be over looked that the main benefit for this is that,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, so, thus, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09727626459 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65860996336 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587548638132 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.5178527414 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.090909091 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254890526493 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100143826057 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05094590148 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154708057835 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379148686159 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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