Nowadays cities have become overcrowded. Given reason and its solutions.
Today majority of people migrating in urban areas have become escalating day by day due to this citified sectors have become overpopulated. There are uncountable complications like job opportunities and best facilities provided by metropolitan areas are main along with measures to tackle this obstacles.
The major factors for over flow of people going in cities is high chances of jobs, better health services and higher education provided by urban areas. Moreover, a vast amount of trades, industries, factories and other businesses sets up in metropolitan areas that is why there is more opportunities for jobless masses to get a handsome income provided job as compare to countryside that is why cities have become overcrowded. In addition to this, a better health treatments and higher education given by regime is another factors for rising population in urban areas because in cities have best hospitals with advance technologies and big universities and colleges of different fields so that is the reason masses and students going in citified areas for take best treatments and education. For example,a survey by local newspaper reported that government gives priority to cities as compare to villages because a vast amount of voters living in urban areas.
There are huge number of solutions to stop over flow of humans going in cities and first is that if authorities sets up factories and industries in villages than it is great chances for jobless to getting a better job and they neglect ideas to leave their place as well as going in cities in search of work. In other words, it is mandatory for regime to improve education standards and health services of countryside schools and hospitals. Apart from that, government should spend a some amount of money to give higher education in villages educational centre to students because students are the pillars of nation. Beside that, regime should hir good doctors and provided better treatments in countryside health centres to improve health conditions of patients. For example, USA have opened a high school, best hospitals and sets up trades in their villages to give equal services to all citizens due to this people comfortable living in countryside and give their contribution to an increase of region is economy.
In conclusion, although, there are many factors to overcrowded cities but solutions are also present to solve this hurdles by government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, as for, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2037.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20971867008 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82542839881 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46547314578 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 653.4 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.8882037143 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.75 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5833333333 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143323634512 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522140922211 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535653574867 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890322078529 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473864015932 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.