People life has changed enormously in all the aspect .Food preparation techniques has been changed the life style of people in these days .From my perspective I agree that public way of living changed by the various food preparation techniques. People interest on preparing diet with less effort and intrest in tasting variety of dishes change their living style.
There are numerous ways to prepare food with effortlessly.People are mostly preferring to enjoy the food which prepared with in a short time. For example, fast foods namely noodle, Maggie, toasted bread, fried rice and many other are very popular. Preparing of these foods need very less time for even a beginner can cook with ease and comfort .Moreover, citizens are showing keen on different continental dishes which are much easier to cook .For instance, a dish named pasta is popular in western country. Pasta can be prepared with in no time this helps the people in time management and its tastes is splendid.
Many people are busy with their hectic schedule hence they cannot spend much time on food preparation .One clear example is public in these days need to rush to their office in the early hours so they do not have enough time to prepare food. As a result, the quickly preparation of food techniques become much more popular and change the life style of citizen entirely. Furthermore, the people are much anticipated in tasking new truffles which can prepare with an easy recipe.
In conclusion, the change in food preparation style completely varied the people's life. Introducing easy food preparation recipe helped people to gain better and comfort life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97435897436 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44625575869 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545787545788 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5625545987 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.454545455 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182438211636 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905304314688 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474542441875 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134060963874 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418511323369 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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