Nowadays, international travel has influenced travellers and nations. Do you think the problems of international travel outweigh the advantages?
From the past generation until this modern era, thanks to the advancement of transportation,its makes individuals have been traveling overseas. While I agree that this trend has undeniable disadvantages, I am of the opinion that its merits are far more significant for both tourists and countries.
To start with, it is clear that traveling brought some drawbacks to the host countries and travelers. First of all, from the aspect of host country, traveler might left enormous waste and spoil the environment of the attraction in the countries where they stay. This problem cost a lot of money to dispose of waste, what is more, maintain and refurbish the environment. Secondly, the cost of living would be increase for the locals such as land, food and accommodation fees. This is explained by supply and demand rules, excessive demanding of expenses rise the value of goods and services which could make local to spend extra cost for living. This also affect to tourists who want to travel that countries, they need to consume bubbled price or unnecessary payment.
On the other hand, I believe that the positive effects of international travel on host countries and tourists eclipse the negative ones. The primary advantage is that tourism could boost and stimulate the economic flow of recipient countries. Travelers activate local market hotel, activities and cuisine by which finally new jobs would be created and it could be good source of revenue for local community. At the same time, people could broaden their knowledge and horizon through meeting foreigners. According to the research, people who have traveled other countries have more open-minded than not that of, which could accept differences like race, food, religion and culture.
Taking everything into account, I am convinced that although the phenomenon that people go to other countries might have a negative impact on the host countries and travelers to some extent, the advantages far overshadow the drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , its
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, such as, first of all, to start with, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23510971787 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79502201645 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605015673981 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7313949287 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.285714286 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181681108458 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062830653214 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527602549292 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105039604373 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328139679394 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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