one of the paramount contentious issue today relats to the overcrowding of cosmopolitan cities. In this essay, the causes of overcrowding in the cities will be will be proffered by me, and I will also explicate upon the remedies, reaching a reasoned conclusion.
Overcrowding of monumental city can be caused by myriads of factors. Political instability insurgency in certain areas, lack of good job in the countryside, and educational tourism are also some of the reason why cities can become overcrowded. For instance when there is a political instability and emergency people migrate to city that are safe; thus leading to overcrowding of such cities. Furthermore, most people will preferred to travel to city where there are state of the art facilities to obtain quality education. Thus all these reasons contribute to the overcrowding of big cities, that have excellent of facilities and good jobs.
However, there are some situation to this problems. Firstly since education is a cynosure to successful economy, there should not more funds to approached education in rural areas. In fact, every effort should be made by the government to provide up-to-date facilities in all school. By doing so, educational tourism can be minimised. Secondly, a large number of jobs can be provided to the youth by shifting the focus on prevention of good rather than important. This will increase the number of industry in the remote areas where people can be employed. Besides, in order to reduce insurgency leader should ensure theyfulfill their campaign promises and in turn will prevent conflict that may brew from remonstration.
After having elucidated the pertinents points of this issue, I opine that migration caused by political instability, lack of good job and educational tourism are some of the main reasons why cities can become overcrowded and this problem can be solved by good governance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25245901639 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98254349644 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534426229508 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2989257107 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.8 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175526909586 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615858393449 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419618238084 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116364210351 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313437689082 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.