There are various ways to earn for living, including being employees of someone else's company and also being self-employed. These days, a lot of people do not want to be an employees of corporations anymore. Otherwise, they decided to be self-employed. This essay will discuss the reasons why this situation happens, and also the possible drawbacks of this situation.
There are some reasons that makes people consider to quit from being employees and to be self-employed. Firstly, being an employee lacks time flexibility. This is because, the vacation days for employees are very limited and also employees have fixed working schedule. This is different from being a self-employed, where people can decide by themselves about their working schedule and day-offs. Secondly, become and employee are often stressful due to the pressure from their bosses. As our position in a company rise, we will have more pressures and tasks from our bosses. On the contrary, a self-employed person have no pressure from bosses because they are their own bosses in their own businesses.
However, there are several possible downsides of being self-employed. Firstly, people who choose to be self-employed have to be ready to bear all of the risks and consequences that may happen to their businesses continuity. This is different from being an employee, because employees only do the needed tasks and they do not own the company, so automatically they will not morally feel to be responsible for business continuity. Next, being self-employed have bigger risk to be failed and get no income than to be an employee. This is because, an employee has fixed income from the company, while being self-employed usually fails at first and have bigger risk to have unstable income.
In conclusion, a lot of people decided to be self-employed because of several advantages including having more time-flexibility and having less pressure from bosses. However, there are also possible drawbacks to consider including have to be ready to bear all risks and consequences, and the possibility to fail and have unstable income.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an employee' or simply 'employees'?
Suggestion: an employee; employees
...days, a lot of people do not want to be an employees of corporations anymore. Otherwise, the...
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Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider quitting'.
Suggestion: consider quitting
...here are some reasons that makes people consider to quit from being employees and to be self-emp...
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Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... self-employed have to be ready to bear all of the risks and consequences that may happen ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 13.1623246493 228% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26409495549 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01784354377 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445103857567 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8066168193 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5555555556 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7222222222 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415616476279 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17438495657 0.084324248473 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108815529333 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292424279739 0.151304729494 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947878673392 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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