Most of the people prefer to be entrepreneurs rather than working for some organization. This essay will discuss the cause for this and the disadvantages of being an entrepreneur.
To start with, there are few reasons why people like to be self-employed such as less secured job, few job opportunities and more available resources which help people in establishing their own jobs. With the increase in competition for employment, many people are being unemployed as there are not enough employment opportunities. Even if people are employed in any field, then there is no job security as they could be replaced by people with more skills. In addition, there are many resources that are helping people in managing their own business. For instance, a person who in interested in cooking different dishes can do some management course and become a chef. This way he can start a new hotel which serves various cuisines and also provide employment to many people.
There are few disadvantages of being self-employed such as bearing one's own losses, varied income per month or less income. A person who earns money by running his own business is accountable for the losses which occur in the business. The money earned every month does not remain the same. Self-employed person can get higher income in one month and less income in other month. He might also get less income which may not be enough to fulfill his needs. This will create a trouble in managing the expenditure for an entrepreneur.
In conclusion, many people prefer to become an entrepreneur rather than working for a company because of less secured jobs, less number of job opportunities and the increase in the number of education facilities. There are some disadvantages of this such as balancing their own losses, variations in the income received in different months.
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- IELTS 8 Test 3 Writing Task 1
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05245901639 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88807610817 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488524590164 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7843030466 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3125 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376527633503 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127674707928 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931929881359 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236698406988 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847488862042 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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