Nowadays, there are more opportunities for women than there were in the past. Some people think this situation has cause more problems than it has solved.
What are your opinions on this?
With the development of the society, the role of women has played a crucial role in both working place and family. More and more great opportunities are assigned to women compared to the past. There are those who argue that this may lead to negative effects. To my mind, it is totally unacceptable to agree with this viewpoint for several reasons.
First of all, the position of women is better improved, this allows women to contribute much more to the socio-economic development. It is clearly that, there are number of well-educated women who have well-trained in the universities and have high...
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Sentence: It would be unequal if skilled employees are not explointed in the working places.
Error: explointed Suggestion: exploited
Sentence: Another reason is that women are being regarded as breadwinner as well as economic provoder in the family.
Error: provoder Suggestion: provider
Sentence: This means that women are independent on men relating finacial issue, so women could make great decisions in the family because they have money via a steady income.
Error: finacial Suggestion: financial
Sentence: It seems to me that it is essential to create opportinities for women to devote their capacity to society.
Error: opportinities Suggestion: opportunities
Sentence: Opportunities for women help them to play a more important role not just in famliy but also society.
Error: famliy Suggestion: family
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