At this moment in time, due to some bad circumstances which might occur in underdeveloped nation, people are forced to immigrate to the contemporary cities in order to elude having a severe conditions. As far as i’m concerned, i lean towards this approach to regulate this issue and restrict bad consequences.
First and foremost, vast majority of people have a perception in which increasing the number of immigrated people puts a strain on citizens. Indeed, concentrating about rising thefts as well as overpopulation have a repercussion on them. Furthermore, it is so conspicuous that providing a suitable accommodation and camp for refugees need a considerable amount of financial sources. Hence, it has a profound impact on people’s welfare and prone them to not staying in credit. In order to cope with this situation, having sturdy boundaries and enhancing rules corresponded to the immigration would have an impressive impact.
On the other hand, some would argue that putting a permanent permission to import refugees is so integral. That is, hiring predominant staff among them is the culmination of allowing them to enter our country. Furthermore, a low income is needed for them and it stands to reason that this circumstance is beneficial for storing more budgets. From my point of view, despite the fact that considering these criteria is so essential, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages because of some serious threats and also the development of vulnerable positions stems from lacking of the suitable law.
Overall, having a sustainable environment and managing this approach are one the most important attributes. In addition, putting up a strong infrastructure and a useful interaction between modernized countries might put world in a promotional way.
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 84
- Learning english at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out.In your opinion is it important for everyone to learn English. Should we try to ensure the survival of local l 67
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 67
- Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end world poverty and hunger Others say that economic growth is damaging the environment and should stop Discuss both views and give your own opinion 11
- Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world.Why is this?What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'condition'?
Suggestion: condition
...ities in order to elude having a severe conditions. As far as i’m concerned, i lean toward...
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Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I’m'?
Suggestion: I’m
...e having a severe conditions. As far as i’m concerned, i lean towards this approach...
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Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...re conditions. As far as i’m concerned, i lean towards this approach to regulate ...
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Line 7, column 227, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a promotional way" with adverb for "promotional"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...en modernized countries might put world in a promotional way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, so, well, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25153025199 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632142857143 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5668567367 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.307692308 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120545397731 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373898203538 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0242351310169 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0677356904233 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00974097729315 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.