The accidents on the road increasing tremendously day-to-day.Some people think imposing severe punishments for driving offences will decrease the rate of road accidents. However, I think , giving severe punishments for road rule violations will not solve the issue, but some other problems also tackle effectively in order to ensure a safe journey on our roads.
First and foremost is , roads in cities are congested and the number of vehicles soaring everyday. Therefore, governments have to take steps to broaden roads and should decrease the number of vehicles by imposing heavy tax for the private vehicles. When private car taxes are high , people will choose the public transports for commuting. By reducing the number vehicles on the road in this way we can cut down the number of accidents on road. The broaden roads will have enough space to all the remain vehicles , gradually the accidents on road will be reduced. For example, recently, Delhi government implemented a new rule to reduce the number of private vehicles. According to government officials there it is successful.
Moreover,instead of imposing heavy punishments,Governments should run awareness program which can explain the importance of safe driving and following traffic rules effectively. When the reasons for road accidents explained with pictures and videos, they will understand the seriousness of the problem. In addition to that, putting severe punishments was a old technique which was not s effective method. Thus, time arrived for a change this old ineffective method and should try some new approaches.In some countries in west,for instance, governments running awareness program instead of severe punishments
To conclude, governments should try some new ways tackle road accidents instead of imposing heavy punishments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54512635379 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14019787505 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541516245487 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.232921543 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.153846154 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229133376334 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846504249287 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556916876373 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153391216064 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432633559533 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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