organizing a large family celebration such as a wedding can often create problems. what can be the problems associated with organizing a large family event and what solutions can you suggest ?
A large family event is a place for all people to have the happiness. But, in the process of setting up the celebration, making mistakes is inevitable. In the following essay, I will discuss some of the issues and how to tackle it.
One of the main problems is that it is hard for guests to attend in terms of the time. As usual, large family celebrations are held based on the family members’ schedule. For example, there are some families choosing a working day to celebrate. Hence, attenders find difficult to be present at the ceremony. Perhaps the most significant drawback is that the celebration could be interrupted by the hyperactivity of children. For instance, not paid attention by their parents or relatives, children would run with no direction in the event space. The din from them irritate guests. Moreover, if they make something like a flowerpot fall on the ground. The ceremony being conducted have to be paused for the cleaning.
I believe the solutions to these problems, however, is simple. First, a large family ceremony should be organized on weekends, which is a day off for all people and facilitate attenders’ commute and arrival. Secondly, children would be kept an eye on their parents. In addition, parent should educate their child about the meaning of the celebration in advance. As a result, little boys or girls would show a certain respect for the event they attend and set a limit on their own behaviors.
In conclusion, large family ceremonies bring a chance of not only meeting friends but also gather all the family members together. Granted it have some problems happening at that time, but we can solve it with effective methods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96140350877 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8062630565 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.928319091 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.4210526316 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15789473684 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240868780448 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628344666275 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598407896093 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141870487388 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408223000268 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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