Parents of fat children should be punished for making them fat. Do you agree or disagree
These days the problem of children’s obesity has become a debatalbe issue . There is an opinion that parents of obese children ought to be punished for making them fat. As far as I am concerned, I find such an idea reasonable since children’s health is definitely their parents’ concern. Besides, needless to say, eating habits which can result in obesity are instilled within a family.
First and foremost, each and every parent should keep abreast of their offspring’s. It is common knowledge that obesity is regarded as a diseas. As long as parents notice that their child is gaining weight, they should take actions straightaway. Otherwise, it means that parents try to avoid their fundamental (basic) duties, which is reprehensible.
Secondly it is cristal clear that the overwhelming majority of children tend to get accustomed to a sample diet which is typical for their family. In other words, providing junk food or healthy meals are the norm in a family there is every likelihood that a child will stick to their same eating habits. Consequently, parents ought to try their hardest so as to encourage their children to maintain a healthy lifestyle and to be a clean-living person. For instance, they should creat a balanced and varied diet according to their children’s needs. Under no circumstances, should parents lose control regarding what their children eat.
To summarize, given all the above-mentioned information every single parent should be aware of their responsibility for their children’s health. So long as they don’t pull their weight or show a cavalier disregard for, their children’s health, authorities should punish them via fines or something else. I am of the opinion that such a policy is sound as obesity is becoming increasingly common among children of different ages at present
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, as to, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30508474576 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1904611956 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572881355932 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.038031107 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8125 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24810912234 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958373960838 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113225624566 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162766913094 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515035787955 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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