Nowadays, more and more people tend to live in a metropolis because of the benefit large cities has brought for their living. Consequently, the little villages are becoming more and more quiet than before.So, this essay indicates the profits and drawbacks of living in hamlets.
There were a number of great things about living in villages. Firstly, people, who living in this area, knew their neighborhood very well so they could easily interact with others when they facing problems or need the helps. Therefore, no one felt lonely. For example, in my mother's village. When someone had a big party then neighbors always helped them to prepare, decorate. In addition, children could learn the social skills from elders and they will have a warm personality when they grew up. Secondly, having a small population the rate crime remained very low so people did not worry about the theft and the children were safely in the street. The lifestyle was simple but it was good enough for villagers.
On the contrary, living in the villages also had drawbacks. The infrastructure in the hamlets not as good as in the big cities but it has being improved in recent years. On the other hand, people earn less money which tended them to move to the large cities and found a job with a high salary.
In conclusion, living in the little towns has its own advantages and disadvantages. Nevertheless, metropolis is the most suitable for the people to live in the modern cities and the developing our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...ecoming more and more quiet than before.So, this essay indicates the profits and d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84765625 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57267119643 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609375 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1330632082 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7333333333 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9333333333 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284559419144 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811776607759 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069476500349 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171062809085 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389999949786 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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