People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
It is true that people living urban lifestyle in major cities are plagued with numerous problems with their typical life. This essay will describe these problems and express my view that citizens should be encouraged to move to country side to tackle these problems.
Nowadays the problems in large cities are endless. Transportation and medical facilities are heavily affected by massive migration. In almost every major cities are facing shortage of public transport which is forcing buses and trains to carry over it's capable limit which is not ideal from the safety point of view. Not only that people have to wait behind a long queue in order to ride into bus. This problem also forced some people to opt to use their private cars which is also responsible for traffic congestion. Apart from that all the hospitals are running out of supplies and people have to stay on the floor because they are running out of beds. Dhaka can be an adequate example of excessive urban migration, the roads are clogged with heavy traffic along with heavy traffic.
In my point of view, the government should convince people to move to small towns. This would certainly lift the pressure of all the public facilities like hospitals and transports. Fewer people would travel by buses and trains which would eventually reduce traffic congestion. Hospitals would not have to deal with overwhelming patients. Beside this, more people living in country side means decentralization of development. At the moment only big cities are developed leaving small town underdeveloped. If people started to live in villages then to urbanization would happen automatically. This would also tempt people not to move to mega cities. Government would never run out of problems to solve in overpopulated cities rather they should try to shift the population to countryside.
In conclusion, overpopulated city is a major problem in the world, without moderation of population between city and countryside there is no way that the problem can be solved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'carrying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: carrying
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oped leaving small town underdeveloped. If people started to live in villages then...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, apart from, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12990936556 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71957027258 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546827794562 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4942285494 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3684210526 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4210526316 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328116097567 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981942061817 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747311681121 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206971234228 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682999473943 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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