People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
With the development of advanced technology, people often disposed towards live in the mega-cities. There are countless of the benefits of living in the city, same as problems are also inevitable. During such condition, higher authorities have an indispensable role in managing such situations. This essay would discuss some of the essential problems of living in large cities and describes the role of the higher authorities.
There are several manifold points that represent the outrageous effect of living in urban areas. First and foremost, today in big cities population is increased significantly and as a result, the renting price of a house reached at peak value. For instance, the density of people in Mumbai is a paramount concern for the government because the price has risen since the last decade.
Due to that, there are several problems become normal like unemployment, inflation, and violation of the law. Also, pollution and global warming supersede all its records, owing to emission of the detrimental gases. Hence, it seems to be impossible to get fresh air in big cities.
Moving towards the smaller villages is not a permanent solution. I think higher authorities should try to employ several important rules that effect on the contemporary situation of the urban areas. Instead of the stimulates people towards the settled in rural areas, governments should organize special meetings with people of the town and try to find out the best way for auspicious future of the cities. For example, in China, population growth substantially rose up during the end of the 19th century, but due to the good relationship between the governments and people lead this growth down in the 5 years.
To recapitulate, every coin has two sides, therefore settlement in cities is not an exception. There are several cons in living city but, here we consider the unavoidable advantages of living in urban areas. In addition, the government has the ability to deal with certain time then there is no need to move towards the regional towns.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15269461078 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84180318026 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574850299401 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6727911468 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.235294118 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6470588235 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255766389824 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672506382112 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474367837918 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118567593115 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483683132054 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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