People today find their lives more and more dominated by their jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is said that in modern life the life of many individuals is surrounded by their jobs. I agree with statement.
Nowadays, the cost of living is rapidly growing, and most people have no choice but to work hard to meet their needs. They have to earn a lot of money to cover their expenses, including renting the house, utility bills, school enrolment of children and other important requirements. As a result, it is naturally that people are forced to work full time. In my experience, sometimes for some people office extends into the home, and they have no time to spend with their family but yet they need to avoid to generously spend money and try to have more savings. Additionally, most of the time in families with children, the income of partner cannot help and both parents have to work whether at home or out.
We can see that another reason that can make people workaholic, and their job can dominate their lives is that they may experience insufficiently reliable relationships in their families or they are in condition that love is conditioned on performance. Work may become a compensatory mechanism to help balance emotions, replace uncomfortable feelings, and achieve a sense of a fulfilling life. Sometimes, some people can only find the social respect that they need in their workplace therefore it is understandable they prefer to engage themselves with work instead of spending time with their family members.
In conclusion, in my view, many people are dependent to their work and sometimes they become addicted to it, and this situation is created by several reasons as I mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 343, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...aturally that people are forced to work full time. In my experience, sometimes for some p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9304029304 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79712006125 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556776556777 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6895957759 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.363636364 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26157725813 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106101591251 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761457549769 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154657885074 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368208244566 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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