Without any doubt, society is divided into two groups as per the distinct mindset of different people. Therefore, this has become debatable issue whether planting trees in vacant areas of cities or developing forests in countryside. This essay will not only shed light on both perceptions but also my point of view will be elaborated in conclusion.
To commence with the first notion, there are myriad things to share in its favor. First of all, to become a carbon neutral nation everyone should plant trees wherever it is possible not only in villages but also in metropolitan areas as well, because only trees can absorb carbon dioxide and produce oxygen. Second point is that, due to industrialization, factories push lot of carbon to the environment and forest areas has drastically reduced because of increase in population specially in urban areas. To exemplify, Indian capital, New Delhi is the one of the major Polluted cities in world. In Tamil Nadu forest have almost disappeared.
Moving towards the second argument in this debate, the first point of this issue, expensive areas of cities should be used to build sky rise building to contribute more revenues to the government rather planting trees. For instance, investors from all over the world attracted to India when they provide space for new factories of multi-national companies. Apart from this, Asthma Patients rate has enormously increase in major cities than villages. As a result, controlling methane emissions and maintaining good health of peoples are the major headache of developing nation.
In conclusion, according to my perspective, authorities should balance to keep a healthy country such as provide a space for greeneries in cities and towns although promote industries in rural areas and villages so that countries can be wealthy in all aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22372881356 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81195788609 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623728813559 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4186097269 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.538461538 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211480072707 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597784927136 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618622691363 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121149307012 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00917544342979 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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