There are some countries where the number of young adults are certainly very large when compared with the number of older people. Whether the pros of this situation outweighs the cons is certainly a contentious topic. In this essay, lets weigh both the advantages and the disadvantages.
First of all, it is an indisputable fact that the population has increased steadily in the last 30-40 years. The outcome of this trend is that many populated countries like India has more young adult population than the older ones. Having younger population in a country is important for the thriving business industries since the young carry more enthusiasm and has more energy and vigour to work than the older counterparts. Other than this, more people can join the army and serve the nation in a better manner. More than 50% of the population of countries like USA, Russia consists of people aged 60 and above. This results in slow growth of a country's economy.
Nevertheless, if a country has more number of older people than the younger ones, it offers the benefit of having a wise population that doesn't take rash decisions. This is one of the salient reasons that the majority of political parties or various communities elect an older person as their leader. One point which I believe to be absolutely pivotal is also the fact that it is the older population that teaches the younger ones about the values and the leadership skills. Hence, their importance cannot be overlooked.
By way of conclusion, I reaffirm my position that the advantages of having a young adult population is far more than having an older population. Though, there must be some balance between the both for a nation to work at its best.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8595890411 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63110668126 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530821917808 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8243959547 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300475422743 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099900958088 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095477020028 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196542096577 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115851952415 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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