It is argued that the proportion of youngsters in some modern nations is considerably higher than that of elderly. While its implications could bring both advantages and disadvantages, I think its resultant benefits are noteworthy.
On the one hand, I believe that the thriving number of young adults is beneficial for society colossally. First, a country which has more youngsters means that its workforces are also fresh and novel. Young people are not only well-qualified at some key fields of the national economy but also bring a good sense of inspiration due to the fact that they are self-motivated and creative as well. Apart from that, the young generation could make a positive shift in the mindset of a community. It is evident that the youngsters are more and more open-minded that the society now could avoid and reduce some conservative beliefs and prejudices from the older generation. Besides, by refreshing the mindset, the community could have a better chance of being innovative and modern than ever.
On the other hand, the disadvantages under this circumstance should not be neglected. Compared to the number of young adults, that of older people which seems less significant could cause a loss of balance in population. Leading from that, the society might be insensitive to the elderly that they would feel unsupported and left behind. Although the new generation brings loads of benefits to the society, the elderly constitute the main educating party that ensures the complete knowledge for the children. The less the number of the older people is, the higher chance of being not grateful among the youngsters is.
In summary, while there are both advantages and disadvantages of a population which has more youngsters than elderly, I think it is much preferable that some exercise should be conducted to maintain the balance of both population groups.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 138, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'youngsters'' or 'youngster's'?
Suggestion: youngsters'; youngster's
...ssally. First, a country which has more youngsters means that its workforces are also fres...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, well, while, apart from, i think, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15359477124 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90369913488 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516339869281 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5247227012 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.642857143 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20825633984 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656349075254 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055341587158 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117403800762 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326413042626 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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