"prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventive measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.
Nowadays, health woe among folks have curtailed because a large proportion is diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventive measures. However, there are some diseases which do not have any cure but person need to go for a treatment. I partially agree with the above statement because both are necessary for a mankind to be healthy.
At the outset, it is known that," prevention is better than cure " but this theses statement is not be apply for all because there are some diseases whose cure is not present. But the diseases whose cure are present then preventions should be taken in order to be healthy. so for that country's health budget is transferred to health education and preventive measures from treatment. By spreading awareness among people through health education as well as by preventive measures can save myriad of mankind from being unhealthy and it will also save the money of local councils. For instance, E-bola, the diseases which is spread due to pigs in India, due to which plethora of citizens of nation had died an facing numerous problems to be cure from that but with the help of preventive measures and health education the woe is solved.
But there are still some diseases whose preventions are not present for that a person needs to go for a treatment. For example, a cure from cancer do not have any health education related to it so that it can be prevented ergo to overcome this diseases it need to go for a treatment. With the help of treatment a person can be cured within few days and also get some benefits.
To recapitulate, both are necessary for a healthy nation and government should spend equal amount of money in treatment and health education and also in preventive measures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'theses'' or 'thesis's'?
Suggestion: theses'; thesis's
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...plethora of citizens of nation had died an facing numerous problems to be cure fro...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...at it can be prevented ergo to overcome this diseases it need to go for a treatment....
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...spend equal amount of money in treatment and health education and also in prevent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, still, then, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84437086093 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65242536016 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440397350993 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.5210392998 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.916666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381866505213 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171018400925 0.084324248473 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889515873678 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260507056966 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602993189895 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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