The author of this topic makes an assertion that people's feeling can be varied accoding to the colour and keeping this in mind workplaces and hospitals should give importance to decorate there environment. So, before this assertion is evaluated,some point of views must be considered.
On one hand, this statement seems probable and do hold some water. In other words, this is a true statement when it comes to affect people's feeling. This is because, every colur has its own beauty and meaning. Sometime, with the use of the colour, phychologiests can understand people's mind. In addition, some people have their own set of choices when it comes to colour and without those favorite colour, their mood can be affected easily. For instance, if someone likes Red as a colour , according to the phychologiest, the person is very much aggresive. Moreover, if a person loves to wear blue shirt, he/she would be demoralized with a gifeted orange colour shirt. In short, colour acts as a mood changer and thus the statement has truth.
On the other hand, colour plays a significant role in workplace as well as hospitals. A person, who is admitted in a hospitals, feels better if he/she can be surronded with light coloured room. For example, according to the survey of Indian Medical Institute, the chance of recovery is higher when patient is placed inside a light colour hospital room when it is compared with loud colour. Furthermore, if a worker find his/her workplace without a colour, he/she may not be as much productive or energitic as a coloured workplace. For instance, according to a recent poll, 85% people want their work environment colourful. Hence, the color does influence on people's health and productivity and for this reason, every office and hospital should give attention towards the colour schemes.
To conclude, it can be reiterated that everyone need their life colourful and this is because it enhance their abilities including health and effectiveness.
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Message: Did you mean 'enhances'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in short, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08282208589 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79454152832 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564417177914 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8084063918 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4705882353 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422136956803 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136489021083 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656979101655 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245809894707 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827619465685 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.