By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people claimed that, life in prison is the most effective punishment for criminals who killed innocent people than that of a capital punishment, because this can be viewed as committing of another murders by killing of murderers. I completely agree with this opinion and think life sentences are much more effective than capital punishments.
Life sentences would be the effective punishment for criminals. Since criminals can consider about their past mistakes, they could think about their current situation and this thought can lead to feeling of regrets and sorrows for the victims. The victim’s families and the public could feel relief to see the criminal’s penance and this would be much more rewarding. If the criminals would be sentenced to death, the criminals may not recognise of their mistakes and they might feel the unfairness with the results. Also, the criminals will do the voluntary works to the local communities where most of people do not want to do, so that criminals can be useful for the local communities.
In terms of capital punishment, it is not the best approach to punish criminals for three reasons. Firstly, criminals would not get the sufficient time to feel sorrows for the victims’ loses or being regretful for their past behaviours. Secondly, it can be viewed as a short term gratification. In a short term, this punishment could sound relief for the victim’s families and to the public, but in the long run this will not cover up their wound and will definitely not bring the victims back to life. Lastly, this is another crime. By killing or murderer can be considered as the act of murder. Even though the criminals sound bad, it is reasonable to not to kill them. Therefore, the death penalty is not the most suitable approach to deal with criminals for all those reasons.
In conclusion, the death penalty can be seen as violation of criminal act of killing a person and it does not provide the insufficient time for penance. Therefore, life sentences are the better punishment for murderers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 607, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ry works to the local communities where most of people do not want to do, so that criminals ca...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'lastly', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240409207161 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.132992327366 0.155533422707 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0664961636829 0.0946595960268 70% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0613810741688 0.0501214627716 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0332480818414 0.0437548338989 76% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117647058824 0.122226691241 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0255754475703 0.0403226058552 63% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81654684082 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0306905370844 0.0326793684256 94% => OK
Particles: 0.00255754475703 0.00163938923432 156% => OK
Determiners: 0.115089514066 0.0861772015684 134% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0485933503836 0.021408717616 227% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00511508951407 0.011925033212 43% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2062.0 1933.35771543 107% => OK
No of words: 343.0 316.048096192 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.01166180758 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.32944606414 0.374742101984 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.279883381924 0.28420135186 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.204081632653 0.203846283523 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.157434402332 0.137316102897 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81654684082 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.037074148 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472303206997 0.56093040696 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.2907426285 60.7387585426 80% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.1764705882 20.7743622355 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.582059098 49.517814964 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.294117647 127.492653851 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.7743622355 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.705882352941 0.814263465372 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 48.1648087807 49.1944974215 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.68539325843 1.69124875643 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334249430874 0.332605444948 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.122246088209 0.102741220458 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0799896770436 0.0668466124924 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.546614202169 0.534860350844 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.188713175445 0.148594505496 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143069741914 0.134430193775 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694712946383 0.0742795772207 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.427459638904 0.324371583561 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.137231802722 0.0638462369009 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24374239913 0.228012699653 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395724741912 0.058150111329 68% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 2.5751503006 349% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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