In the present scenario, Most of the people buying their needs through online instead of visiting nearby stores. Shopping online has it is more advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies. In my essay, I will discuss the important factors of online shopping and it is benefits.
Nowadays, the population is increasing rapidly and they are thinking time is more precious. Just because of this reason online shopping is more popular today. With the help of online shopping, everyone saves their time and health. The things in online shopping provided with more discounts, different new models and attractive cashback also provided by the companies. So, most of the people buying their needs online. For Example, If anyone wants to buy electronic gadgets the company provides the technical specifications, discounts, and warranty so many people showing their interest. Without step outside, without loss of energy, we can buy branded products by shopping online.
On the other side, Shopping online we can pay the amount by debit card or credit cards. With this type of transactions security will be less. sometimes, we lost money because of slow transcations. Indirectly, We are giving our bank details to cybercrime people. Sometimes, We will get fault products through online shopping if you are returning the product and to get new product it will take the two weeks time. Most of the companies provide discounts with these discounts we can not judge the product is good one or not. The huge number of fake products are selling by online with a branded name products.
To Conclude, Online shopping is easier than site visit to nearby shops. At one place we can choose different branded products with good attracting offers but everyone needs to take care of their payment transactions and they need to know about products which they are buying is branded one or not.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Sometimes
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Suggestion:
... they are buying is branded one or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12580645161 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63168281191 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532258064516 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5244383226 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6315789474 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3157894737 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57894736842 7.06120827912 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257897078127 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086092008613 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808720541804 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178630870068 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907537507858 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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