Topic 1: In recent years, the family structure and the role of its members are gradually changing. What kinds of changes can occur? Do you think these changes are positive and negative?
Buiding up a deligt family in the context of modern societies is such a remarable issuse. While the family composition and the effections of every member have been shifted significantly, we should better identify this problem in both advantages and disadvantages.
Extended family has no longer seen as the main structure nowaday, nuclear family has displaced instead of. As a result, we rarely find a big number of people in blood relationship living under a roof. Otherwise, parents and their offsprings would like to shape their own home. In addition, there are more single families , which only man or women live with their children due to some complicated reasons.
The roles have changed vividly too. Women have equal opportunities with their partners in a wide range of aspects: stusdy, work, entertainment and taking care of children. It is no strange to observe that more breadwinners are women. They work out to earn for living when their husbands support domestic uties at home.
As we can see above, these movement bring us some meaningful influences. “Men make houses, Women make home “ can not be right anymore when all of them share responsibilities back and forth. That is why men can get rid of underpressure of finance and because of a stable finance, children will get well-educated.
In contrast, we also mention some drawbacks of the problem. Due to lack of time for home, the family bond can decrease easily and emotional attachment then gets deprived. In some cases, children do not obey their parents and even axtramarital affair and the worst thing is breaking down possibly occur.
In short, all of changings go hand in hand with positive and negative concequences. Being sympathy and having comprehension about starting our family are all about we have to do so as to reach the happiness as well as sustainable development in our own home.
- These days more fathers stay at home and take care of thier children while mothers go out for work What could be the reason for this Do you think is is positive or a negative development 84
- In recent years the family structure has changed as well as family roles What are the changes which have occurred do you think these changes are positive or negative 66
- in today s world of advanced science and technology we still greatly value our artists such as musicians painters and writers what can arts tell us about life that science and technology can not 95
- These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work What could be the reasons for this Do you think it is a positive and negative development 56
- in today s world of advanced science and technology we still greatly value our artists such as musicians painters and writers what can arts tell us about life that science and technology can not 78
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...addition, there are more single families , which only man or women live with their...
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Line 4, column 179, Rule ID: IT_IS_NO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'not' or 'now'?
Suggestion: not; now
...ent and taking care of children. It is no strange to observe that more breadwinne...
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Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this movement' or 'these movements'?
Suggestion: this movement; these movements
...ic uties at home. As we can see above, these movement bring us some meaningful influences. “M...
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Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: '”' seems to be missing
...nt bring us some meaningful influences. “Men make houses, Women make home “ can n...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: '”' seems to be missing
...nces. “Men make houses, Women make home “ can not be right anymore when all of th...
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Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bilities back and forth. That is why men can get rid of underpressure of finance ...
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Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... our family are all about we have to do so as to reach the happiness as well as sustain...
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Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... so as to reach the happiness as well as sustainable development in our own home....
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, well, while, as to, in addition, in contrast, in short, as a result, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00290697674 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81355974923 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636627906977 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4603927965 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9523809524 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.380952381 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33412278203 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100216520671 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129511525349 0.0667982634062 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170048776927 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.181585519734 0.056905535591 319% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...addition, there are more single families , which only man or women live with their...
^^
Line 4, column 179, Rule ID: IT_IS_NO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'not' or 'now'?
Suggestion: not; now
...ent and taking care of children. It is no strange to observe that more breadwinne...
^^
Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this movement' or 'these movements'?
Suggestion: this movement; these movements
...ic uties at home. As we can see above, these movement bring us some meaningful influences. “M...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: '”' seems to be missing
...nt bring us some meaningful influences. “Men make houses, Women make home “ can n...
^
Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: '”' seems to be missing
...nces. “Men make houses, Women make home “ can not be right anymore when all of th...
^
Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bilities back and forth. That is why men can get rid of underpressure of finance ...
^^
Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... our family are all about we have to do so as to reach the happiness as well as sustain...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... so as to reach the happiness as well as sustainable development in our own home....
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, well, while, as to, in addition, in contrast, in short, as a result, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00290697674 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81355974923 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636627906977 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4603927965 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9523809524 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.380952381 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33412278203 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100216520671 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129511525349 0.0667982634062 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170048776927 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.181585519734 0.056905535591 319% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.