The acts of a crime involving people of younger generations have increased considerably. What are all the things that contribute to this negative trend? What can be done to prevent this from happening? This essay will discuss the causes and method of resolving this issue in detail.
Criminal offences are being committed by today's youths for countless reasons. For example, unemployment or employment with inadequate earnings combined with poverty induces such people to indulge in various misdeeds to earn their living. In addition to that, narcotics and drugs too contribute to the rise in the level of criminal misconducts such as rape and murder.
Furthermore, Children from dysfunctional families without proper guidance and supervision are more prone to committing illegal activities such as drug trafficking.
Admittedly, it is a serious concern to the entire human community around the world. Accordingly, steps must be taken to curb these activities. Firstly, the change must start from schools and parents, where children should be thaught about the importance of being civilized and consequences of performing wrongdoings. Secondly, the government should take measures to increase employment opportunities and to improve the standard of living of its citizens. Thirdly, stricter laws are ought to be implemented to deter people from committing such offences. Finally, the state must set up rehabilitation centres to restore the mental health of those who are affected by drug addictions and people who are on the verge of committing a crime.
To recapitulate, youngsters these days involve in criminal activities for numerous reasons such as family problems, drug addiction and financial problems to name a few. Although this undesirable behaviour is in increasing trend, it could be avoided by promoting moral values to the people in their childhood, along with implementation of effective measures by the government, similar to stricter laws and establishment of welfare measures to its citizens to improve the standard of living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'to contribute'?
Suggestion: to contribute
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54458598726 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05808940812 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59872611465 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4529615123 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.8125 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117514977547 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393801641059 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320146035037 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630008175543 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386081670549 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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