In the recent years, it has been found that, the rate of illegal activities has got increased. This leads to criminal offences. This is being monitored by cops carefully. However, because of influences of some factors young generation are not hesitating to do such offences. In this essay we will take a glimpse on those factors and how to deal with it.
Nowadays, there is profound increase in unemployment in some major city. Also, in some places opportunities are based on dreed. This is especially observed by me when I was in my college. There was company came for recruitment. We had fair enough marks even more than one who is from different cast, but they didn’t offer us an opportunity to work with them. It is discrimination as they were not considering marks as criteria rather religion. This leads to offences from one who despise this discrimination. There are other crimes which are being done frequently in major cities like breaking of traffic rules, travelling without ticket, smoking in public places and many more. These are being done mostly by youngsters.
Every problem has a solution and this is also applicable here. Many remedies can be done to reduce such crimes. For instance, taking huge fine for all above mentioned crimes. Also, to imprison them one who is not paying the said fine. Posting their photos with their crime on social media as in these days social media play vital role in society. If we do one can think before doing the same or another crime again.
In conclusion, it is the duty of family to protect young generation from crime world and provide them vision to sustain against it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...s is being monitored by cops carefully. however, because of influences of some factors ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...ose factors and how to deal with it. Now a days there is profound increase in unemploym...
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Line 3, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...factors and how to deal with it. Now a days there is profound increase in unemploym...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80918727915 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59767548806 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625441696113 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8909541974 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.8095238095 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4761904762 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61904761905 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2296171512 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579040220345 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562059587583 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130354459824 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630345205873 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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