Nowadays, circumstance of happening crimes is one of the most prominent challenges in most societies. In contemporary century, the number of children and teenagers delinquents has been increased considerably and there are several significant debates about most noticeable reasons of this phenomenon.
Some social experts are unanimous in effects of wide variety of family reasons in increasing the number of crimes in childhood and youth. They mentioned that some fundamental reasons such as criminal parents, lack of sufficient attention and caution are the main family reasons in happening these events. Some other experts believe that social and educational reasons are more influenced and led to rise the number of crimes in this age. Furthermore, some lawyers emphasize that amount of preventive actions are low in comparison with diversity of crimes in young ages and consequently, it causes to happening some unavoidable crimes in this age. Recent published statistics by U.S. police illustrated that the number of crimes with children and young people under 18 has been increased more than three tenth between 2000 and 2018 and it is a perilous alarm for societies` safety undoubtedly.
On the other aspect, police and majority of psychologists are contributing to find some appropriate preventive actions to fulfill and control the upward trend of these crimes during these years. Additionally some supportive procedures from several NGOs helped governments to devise some protecting plans to eliminate or diminish these crimes in society. Increasing the number of social workers for distributing educational solutions, persuading parents to fulfill their responsibilities properly and making some suitable punitive rules are the most considerable accomplishments to control these crimes through recent decade.
In conclusion, without any hesitation, pursuing this terrible pattern in crimes causes to decreasing safety in society. I believe that a group of distinct logical reasons in families and society led to steady growth in number of crimes between children and young people. My researches and studies revealed that to decrease delinquent numbers in this age, we require a comprehensive preventive action by allocation of all people in family, school and society.
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Suggestion: Additionally,
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66279069767 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.068902935 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.7374476206 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.846153846 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4615384615 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168543321627 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652170481025 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361726503066 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103250941987 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259029604017 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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