Education is the fundamental right of a child it leads to an individual progress. Although many people believe that, an academic process less important than the other subject like sports music dance and so on.I differ to this statement to a large extent for some reasons. My position is argued further with exploitation.
Out of all arguments, the foremost one is academic level is vital role play a into the everyone life and children can learn some basic things from the early aag.In addition, if children will be better a primary classes so they can be get an admission into the good college. Moreover, an accademy classes gives people knowledge and skills, besides, an academic classes aim to teach young people moral values such as, tolerance, sharing and caring.The strongest example when people takes participate into the discussion on some social issues, as improvement provided in an acadamic classes.
However, I would not overlook the other side too. To begin with, some people think music and sports class are not useful their academic levels. sports is almost essential for the mental as well as physical development of an individual. I think some other subjects like arts, sports, music, dance are traditional subjects, but it is gives happiness in the everyone life and it can be remove all worries in the our mind. For instance, i talk about One Sports is the cricket. some people like it, in add it is learn some different skills such as, cooperation, moral value leadership, taking decision and so on.
Thus, to conclude the discussion, it can be finally said that the issue of I disagree to the present day statement because schools should concentrate on academic classes as well as other subjects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: individual progress
...undamental right of a child it leads to an individual progress. Although many people believe that, an ...
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...academic process less important than the other subject like sports music dance an...
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...bject like sports music dance and so on.I differ to this statement to a large ex...
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...ife and it can be remove all worries in the our mind. For instance, i talk about One Sp...
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Suggestion: learned; learnt
...cket. some people like it, in add it is learn some different skills such as, cooperat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99652777778 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62361947458 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600694444444 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.6035759897 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.916666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188595952988 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672520009543 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592963865286 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116934010309 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039951016631 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.