It is true that, in this contemporary era, computers are being advanced rather than human beings and some scientists introspect that it is good for people where, others are worry about this. However, in my consideration, it is good for human beings as well as country.
To start with, there are numerous examples that upper statement is right. Firstly, nowadays in the hospitals doctors are not able to see all the patient so when robots would come so they would easily see all the patient. For example, in many devloped countries robots are involving in surgeries and they can do accurate and better surgeries as compared to human being. That is why that countries use them. Secondly, robots can solve easily any insoluble problem in business because most work is being done by many people and they do not need to go anywhere. In addition, they are operating all things now by their mobile phones. Furthermore, business would easily grow by robots because computers can take fast good decisions and explore new things instead humans. Thirdly, in many places human beings are insufficient to do work like nuclear companies, oil refineries. Moreover, robots can do easily jobs without taking any problem regarding radiation or temprature.
Looking at the other view, if, computers would able to do any work it would create lots of problems. First and foremost, many individuals only would hire the computers rather than humans because it are convenient and cheaper. In addition, it would replace human so unemployment would create and crime rate and other violence activities also escalate. Last but not least, in the future if, only robots will use so any other nation can easily hack the whole country system and it would worrying trend for many people.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly people can better do anything in academic fields yet. We must understand that it is crucial for human beings and it is compulsory for development in developing countries especially.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...computers rather than humans because it are convenient and cheaper. In addition, it...
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'worry'
Suggestion: worry
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, in addition, as well as, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05810397554 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61309929574 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544342507645 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3588050371 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2941176471 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137071757207 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471479715207 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051355628325 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10757068593 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561750567206 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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