Due to the advancement in technology, most of scientists claim that they can predict propensity for criminal activities in a child by studying his/her brain at age of 3. I think external factors which influence a child’s behavior towards these activities has made possible for scientists to determine this factor. This essay will discuss the effects of outside influences on the brain and how parents will raise their children in right manner.
To begin with, children are living in an environment where external factors like media really influence a child’s brain. Therefore, it cannot be deny that brain decides their character rather than upbringing. Moreover, some kids are more aggressive and impulsive than their peers which divert their mind toward robbery, fighting with other from the early age which might develop them into a criminal person rather than good person. To illustrate this, it is surveyed by national crime survey organization that 60 percent of convicts in jails commit their crime from infant age. On the contrary, sometimes children are born in an environment of crime or tragedy like family breakdown which takes the ability to judge right or wrong for them which enhance their chances of committing crime as an adult.
However, once it is declared that child has an inclination towards crime, parent must ensure that child is taught by the importance of moral values, watch his/ her peer group. Besides this, they should not only teach them the importance of being a good person in a society but also, about the consequences of breaking a law in a society.
In conclusion, if a scientist studies can determine the future of a child whether it is in positive or negative direction. Then, parents should take the benefits of this and divert their children towards being a good citizen.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the scientists') or simply say ''most scientists''.
Suggestion: most of the scientists; most scientists
Due to the advancement in technology, most of scientists claim that they can predict propensity ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, i think, in conclusion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62071025148 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.6272862605 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.75 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195563421839 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756461848473 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052655751743 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128244995539 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052439458449 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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