Many scientists believe that our next generations will use a global expression to interact with each other. While this tendency might exert several negative effects on humanity, I still believe it has some positive effects.
Firstly, if a single language dominates the world, other languages would vanish. As languages play a vital role in a country’s culture, if they dissipate, every country would lose their identities. For example, countries like India has 22 languages and are known for its diversity. If these languages are replaced by a single language, the cultural values of the country would be devastated. To exemplify, in a recent education policy by the Indian government, when they tried to impose Hindi in south Indian states, there were large protest in the southern part of the country against the same. Further, if the entire world communicates in single language, it would become difficult to do secret communications. For example, whenever Indian cricket team plays against Australian team, the wicketkeeper used to give instructions to the bowler in Hindi, otherwise, the batsman would understand and play accordingly.
On the flipside, there are numerous advantages of a global language. As people speak same language across the globe, it would be easier for people to migrate to different places. To elucidate, currently people cannot immigrate to Germany, unless they are proficient with German language. However, if the entire humanity speaks a single language, anybody can travel to any country if they have the right skills for the profession. Moreover, as the world would have mono linguistics, information could be easily shared among people across the globe. For example, many information regarding astronomy and science are in Sanskrit language which if deciphered in English, the entire world would be benefitted.
To recapitulate, I personally believe that although unified language across the globe would impact the local languages, still its advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 562, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...g people across the globe. For example, many information regarding astronomy and sci...
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Line 5, column 562, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...g people across the globe. For example, many information regarding astronomy and science are in ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 642, Rule ID: IF_IS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
... science are in Sanskrit language which if deciphered in English, the entire world...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49679487179 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89088883354 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586538461538 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 2.10420841683 570% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2287011779 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.1875 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125975319943 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423097125363 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352942640905 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0756086414957 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356685995595 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 562, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...g people across the globe. For example, many information regarding astronomy and sci...
^^^^
Line 5, column 562, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...g people across the globe. For example, many information regarding astronomy and science are in ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 642, Rule ID: IF_IS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
... science are in Sanskrit language which if deciphered in English, the entire world...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49679487179 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89088883354 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586538461538 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 2.10420841683 570% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2287011779 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.1875 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125975319943 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423097125363 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352942640905 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0756086414957 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356685995595 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.