There are experience new medicine and method check out healthcare is necessary but without any disease testing is wrong. In this essay I will discuss some crucial testing on animal but checkout in monthly it's ok but new drugs apply I strong opposed this essay.
They can not only human survive on this planet but also animals, insect other so on run away. Without Checking given on animal new drug is wrong way effect on creature and several other infection in touch of dogs they widespread virus. Animals is loyalty better than folks. Animal creature are very touch in human so any viral infection on cats than lot of bacteria spread on surrounded so within 1-2 monthly checkout and medical testing is necessary. The research human can new drugs testing on animal so awareness program should conduct amongst the people. Many people against the research then government should be can provide new solutions.only can government can control and stop the new experirement against the animal so new generation can see the animal other wise only human can survive planets. Animal is mute.
On the flip side, new medicine experiment fist priority given on animals because human can take drug without testing so many viral infection on spend on world wide.
To summarise, fist of all animal is run way this plane but 5000 years ago. Now this day animal and human both survive the planets. Now aday human and animal both given on Same priority and same rule and regulation conduct
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- Writing task 1 ielts liz 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 206, Rule ID: IT_IS[8]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...sting on animal but checkout in monthly its ok but new drugs apply I strong opposed...
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Line 3, column 763, Rule ID: OTHER_WISE_OTHERWISE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'otherwise'?
Suggestion: otherwise
...al so new generation can see the animal other wise only human can survive planets. Animal ...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
...ing so many viral infection on spend on world wide. To summarise, fist of all animal i...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
...ing so many viral infection on spend on world wide. To summarise, fist of all animal i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90039840637 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34439725154 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513944223108 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0384492189 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6153846154 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.46153846154 7.06120827912 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315134199311 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124038445035 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787742060238 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188352355017 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698171814989 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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