Human behaviors are damaging species of animals and leading to the extinction of both marine and terrestrial animals. The irresponsibility of human is a major issue for reducing the number of animals in the environment. The effective method is to instruct the importance of the environment such as animals for people to be aware of losing the environments.
The initial logically of extinction of animals are human activities in daily life. Using plastics bags are the majority issue that harmful for animals especially marine creature because plastic bags difficult to biodegrade and they spend more than 100 years to decompose and recycle. the common ways to eliminate plastics bags is to throw away to the ocean. According to BBC News, about 30% of whales have died due to swallowing plastic bags and unable to digest. In addition, human behaviors are creating pollution to animals. Specifically, deforestation for demanding of social development are destroying animals’ habitation, so it is difficult for animals to survive without the tree and their habitats leading to higher distinction rate.
The best solution to solve the mentioned issues is to teach people to be a conservative person. This method should be begin with elementary students through the adults. Various of environtments campaign are provided by independent organizations to solve single purpose that is extinction of animals in the environtment. For example, schools activities, such as wild trip, teach students how to stay in the jungle and learn how the animals are survive. The stunning of wildlife will teach students to protect many species in the wild. As a result, teaching environment lessons make people noticed the important of the environment for human being.
In conclusion, the reasons for extinction of animals are caused by irresponsibility of human. The solution to solve this problem is to offer people knowledge about animals and environments, so they can have individual’s awareness.
- Some expert believe that it is better for children to begin learning a forienge language at primary school rather than secondary school 63
- Most societies has its homeless people,Some people think that the best way to help him is to give them money.To what extent do you agree? 56
- Some expert believe that it is better for children to begin learning a forienge language at primary school rather than secondary school. 56
- Some people think that young people should follow the traditions of their society and other think young people should be free to behave as they will Discuss both views and give your opinion 86
- Some people think that parents should restrict their children from watching TV and playing computer games Instead time should be spent on reading books Do you agree disagree 44
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...be aware of losing the environments. The initial logically of extinction of anim...
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Line 2, column 286, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...han 100 years to decompose and recycle. the common ways to eliminate plastics bags ...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'begun'?
Suggestion: begun
...servative person. This method should be begin with elementary students through the ad...
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Line 3, column 444, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'survived'.
Suggestion: survived
...he jungle and learn how the animals are survive. The stunning of wildlife will teach st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40064102564 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15026766966 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519230769231 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.135963812 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1176470588 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202579449198 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736811112291 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636662651531 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138346028304 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356326221507 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.