The entire world has been polarised in two equally sized groups when it comes to saving the mother nature. Many people believe that the government can protect the environment by banning the deforestation, promoting public transport, implementing fine on cutting down plants. whereas others think that individual should take responsibility to plant more and more trees, stop water wastage and make use of public transport. In the following essay, I will discuss both views with examples and state my opine.
Let us begin by look at the role of government, authorities can make strict rules to preserve the remaining trees and farming land, moreover, they can ban the industries which are producing hazardous gases and polluting the water. For example, many factories do not have a proper drainage system, they simply throw the water in the nearby areas that cause serious problem to the trees, animal, and humans. In addition, bureaucrats can run campaigns to promote the use of public transport and planation. it will control air pollution at a certain extent.
One the other hand, each individual should take the auth to plant 2 new trees to preserve nature for the next generation. apart from this, people should use water efficiently. To instance, many young adults use water to clean their vehicle every day, throw garbage in lakes and river that contributes to water pollution.
I personally believe that the protection of the environment is not the sole responsibility of the government. Government and people of the nation should work in collaboration to save the planet for future generation and to make it livable for birds, animal, and humans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, moreover, so, whereas, apart from, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15185185185 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76314417041 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614814814815 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9756611453 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172663789185 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580820804928 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559183808422 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112278432005 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755836873206 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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