Bicycle is the most healthy and cheap vehicle for travelling, especially in highly populated countries like India and China. Unfortunately, these countries not using the advantage of this humble vehicle. This essay asses the possible reasons for this attitude and suggest some relevant solutions as well.
To begin with, the first and foremost reason for this problem is congested roads and traffic jam. The increasing number of vehicles cause traffic jam and roads are not expanded to accommodate soaring vehicles. In this scenario, bicycling is a risky job in these nations as there is not enough space in the roads. Another important problem is unavailability of separate tracks for bicycles. Bicycles are too tiny and fragile comparing to other big vehicles on the road thus, bicycle riders are not ready to risk their lives by running along with heavy vehicles . For example, in India many bicycle riders lost their lives in the accidents with heavy vehicles. Finally, the physical effort in running bicycles, people became lazy and used with sedentary life styles. Most of them using private care for commuting . By using private cars instead of bicycles they can reach the office suddenly and freshly.
However, there are some possible solutions for the above mentioned problems. Constructing wider roads will solve the problem of traffic jam and road congestion to a certain level beside that, the number of vehicles on the road also need to be regulated by taxing heavily on private cars. This will encourage the use of bicycles. Secondly, governments have to take initiative in building separate tracks for cycles. Separate bicycle tracks will help to reduce the fear in bicycle riders. Finally, seminars should conduct by the hospitals for explaining the healthy side of bicycle riding. In Australia, for instance, bicycle became common vehicle after the health ministry conducted seminars on it.
To conclude, although there is some problems with encouraging bicycle usage , we can easily solve it with the above mentioned remedies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29754601227 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57291556307 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555214723926 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8315675065 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.35 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293599551191 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949982243728 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460608930888 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185938397447 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317476726694 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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