Nowadays, more people are suffering from obesity and their fitness level and health condition is lower than it used to be before. There are many reasons that are mostly rooted in their lifestyle and some steps could be taken to tackle these problems.
Today, people are facing huge differences in terms of their lifestyle. The emergence of technology may be the first and foremost factor, by which the need for physical movement has declined to its lower level ever. While most jobs involved high mobility in the past, now the hardest duties have been made as easy as pressing a button, thanks to the recent advancements of technology. This breakthrough phenomenon of our era not only changed the way people work, but also evolved their type of entertainment. Whereas outdoor excursions accounted for the most popular hobbies then, online activities are the most common kind of entertainment in the present. Putting all these factors together, the level of obesity and related health problems are increasing dramatically.
Despite the worries risen by these issues, governments definitely play a pivotal role as per regulations and facilities. One of the most crucial duties of them is to constitute more amenities, including sports centers and other public places to encourage people to step out of their sedentary lifestyles. Another substantial measure is to improve the health standards related to food products, which are the foundation of one’s health condition. Last but not least is also to enhance the health and insurance acts by benefiting the less-privileged society class to take advantage of proper medical services. Although there are a lot more to be done to solve these problems, the abovementioned steps can boost the situation.
To sum up, besides the disastrous influences of technology and modern life on the wellbeing and fitness of society members, there are still some measures that can be taken to prevent more catastrophes and cope with the already incurred hardships.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, so, still, then, well, whereas, while, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2554517134 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82930537339 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616822429907 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4673722129 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250772003152 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782965022419 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058660730073 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151186479228 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594042754213 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.