In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Write at least 250 words.
In some countries are becoming more common a big number of diseases related to sedentary lifestyle and standards of health and fitness are declining. This essay will argue about the main causes of these issues and will suggest some solution for that.
The principal cause of health crisis currently affecting many individuals is the increase of working hours. Nowadays, the big private industries require ever more work hours. If the employees are forced to work for 8 or more hours a day, they will not have enough time to dedicate to sport or fitness. For instance, the employees who work in the most important clothing industries like ZARA, begin to work at 8 a.m. an end at 8 p.m. with a little pause, when they have a lunch. For this people it is impossible to play sports. The most practical solution for that is to re-establish the working hours, with introduction of a big pause of about 2 hour every two days, when the employees and employers can go to the fitness room which is built in the office by the private industries.
In addition, family with little children is another cause to contribute to sedentary life of many people. All parents, after work-day, dedicate their free time to their little children, in this way they cannot live a health life, because their fitness is inexistent. The main solution may be to create a fitness courses for children and parents together. If the children attend in these particular courses, they will avoid, for instance, the heart diseases and when they will be teenagers, they will be used to health lifestyle.
To conclude, it is a good thing to combine working-hours with fitness time. It may be possible with gym in the office. However, the health of children and parents could be preserved by some fitness course for whole family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82524271845 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58389059573 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514563106796 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6875569841 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165497090306 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064306369021 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440292109046 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117651147647 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303199000386 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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