In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
It is true that now an increasing number of people are suffering from obesity, which leads to the decrease of the public health conditions. There are several causes for this phenomenon and measures can be done to tackle this issue.
Modern lifestyles should be responsible for the increasing obesity rate and worsening public health level. In order to survive in the fierce competition in the workplace, working overtime has become a common thing for people who live in modern society. Consequently, people have less free time, which result in the lack of exercise and the dependence on fast food. People nowadays lead a sedentary lifestyle, however, exercise is essential in maintaining a healthy body. People who lack exercise are at higher risks of catching illnesses or becoming overweight than those who participating in physical activities regularly. Moreover, people prefer to eat fast food instead of cook at home for the sake of saving time. It is acknowledged that fast food usually contain too much fat, salt and sugar which can cause obesity.
It is necessary for the government to play an active role in helping people to live a healthy lifestyle. Firstly, laws should be introduced to prohibit the unlimited work overtime, thus, sufficient leisure time for working people can be guaranteed. Secondly, the government should raise taxes on fast food and reduce taxes on fruit and vegetables in order to encouraging people to eat a balanced diet. Furthermore, healthy lifestyles should be promoted by the government. For example, using celebrities to lead a healthy lifestyle trend might be effective because people tend to imitate the behaviors of celebrities.
In conclusion, the fast paced lifestyle is the reason for the phenomenon of more overweight people and poorer public health conditions. Nevertheless, by implementing effective measures by the government, this problem can be solved.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32673267327 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92093564936 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554455445545 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.1730727912 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135312450529 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507062324749 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307638296062 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098501552261 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179720807385 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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