The masses know that many unhealthy conditions are caused by the increase in fast food consumption. The public shall be realized by this danger with manipulation of the junk food cost.
To begin with, fast food can solve the human problem about the meal in the big cities. People who lived in the metropolitan have a tidy schedule. Sometimes, they forget to reserve a meal in the home and the fast food is attended as a solution. Furthermore, the increasing number of junk food outlet such as KFC, McD, Circle K, take many employers on it. It must be profitable for the country.
On the other hand, the high consumption of junk food brings a side effect on our body. The research has been conducted to analyze the negative issued about this food. There are found in which this food has the low of nutrition, many carbohydrates, and occupying with cholesterol. This focus shall be controlled by the government where the public must know about the risk. Firstly, the package of fast food has the ingredient and the composition of nutrition. Secondly, the price of fast food can be increased to a significant amount. Hopefully, by this management, people have the preference to choose fresh food rather than junk food.
In conclusion, fast food has a benefit for supply food in urgent condition. Moreover, many entrepreneurs can provide this type of business to be profitable for the country. However, this type of food shall be controlled to prevent the medical problem for a human.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87401574803 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76342057476 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527559055118 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.6017064288 49.4020404114 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.8235294118 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9411764706 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256035184464 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952353620596 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040933570721 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17540283818 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242859030589 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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