Some of countries have a law about that companies can not eliminate applicants due to their ages. In my opinion this rule is not reasonable and does not have any positive side.
Firstly, every job require some qualification and most of them related with age. For instance, a kid who are sixteen years old applied for general manager of a company. Most of the employees can not accept that because being a director is not easy and a person who want to became a manager need very serious experiment. So, a child is not suitable for that kind of profession. For that situation there are too many examples that being a pilot, a president, a governor or a doctor.
Secondly, companies can not effectively chose their colleagues because of that kind of policies. They are not decide freely. On the other, unemployment rate can affect adversely because unexperienced people can not eliminate because of their ages. They can attain a place at a company which they do not deserve. This can cause a chaos at the community.
As a conclusion, regulation about job applicants of company is not logical additionally does not have clear advantages. Government should not get involved with companies' employment criteria.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Some of', you should use 'the' ('Some of the countries') or simply say ''Some countries''.
Suggestion: Some of the countries; Some countries
Some of countries have a law about that companies can not...
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Line 2, column 102, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... related with age. For instance, a kid who are sixteen years old applied for general m...
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Line 2, column 396, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t kind of profession. For that situation there are too many examples that being ...
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Line 2, column 436, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... there are too many examples that being a pilot, a president, a governor or a do...
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Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'can' requires base form of the verb: 'choose'
Suggestion: choose
...Secondly, companies can not effectively chose their colleagues because of that kind o...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'decided'.
Suggestion: decided
... of that kind of policies. They are not decide freely. On the other, unemployment rate...
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Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ely. On the other, unemployment rate can affect adversely because unexperienced p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93137254902 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85226728784 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1902032251 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8571428571 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5714285714 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204226007698 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067335783521 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430655056484 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11284667029 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446379054135 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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