In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?
The tendency of renting houses is increasingly prevalent within society rather than that of buying a house. In my opinion, while the benefit of this trend is mainly due to its cost and accessibility, the inconvenience, however, contributes to its drawbacks.
In terms of the cost of rental houses, it is more affordable than that of buying a house because people just need to pay the space that they want to live in, and any inner facilities are already included. In contrast, owning a house means that property is not included in the price, and people have to pay a particular amount of money for that. Another benefit is that rental houses, which are also known as apartments, are popular in most metropolises nowadays. This is the case because these places often attract a great number of people, especially immigrants, coming from all sorts of backgrounds to settle down. They are greatly benefited by its ubiquity as it does not require a lot of time and effort to find.
Apart from the advantages of rental houses, this trend also poses several problems to people's lives. Rental houses are often built before the time that people move in, so they are not permitted to change or rebuilt inner structures such as walls and additional rooms. Hence, people could not fully experience the freedom that they could decorate and design the accommodation as per their convenience and comfort. Another inconvenience that also has an advert impact on people is that the price of rental houses is becoming expensive, and people have to shoulder that financial responsibility for every month in order to keep their place. At the same time, if they barely afford the increasing price of rental houses, the risk of losing their place will occur.
In conclusion, although as per people's preference, renting a house is more affordable and easy to find in big cities, the disadvantages, including the freedom of changing inner structures and the soaring price, should not be dismissed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... inner facilities are already included. In contrast, owning a house means that pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, while, apart from, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99096385542 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72851502418 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548192771084 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.7783551392 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.461538462 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135095183175 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503850276691 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05104736228 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850151511217 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212095667482 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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