Some people hold the opinion that they should buy home; however, others opine to rent a home. This essay delve into the matter further and reach a logical conclusion at the end.
I do not think that being a home ownership is a smart idea. When people spend their money around buying a home, indeed they cut their chance to live in gloomed economy. Hence, the money which should have stumped up in industrial investment through stock market shares, wasted to purchase an accommodation. In addition, living in repetitive place is boring. In this way people miss the chance to try out staying at various places and different cities.
However, the numerous people have a big preference to have their own house, due to the fact it is a kind of investment in some countries. Many countries like Qatar do not have enough space to construct new houses, or their countries get through a maelstrom of inflation like Iran. Therefore, people find out buying a house is a perfect determination. Furthermore, rent payments are a gigantic nightmare for many residents in the big cities like London or Tehran. People when having a better well-being life that they do not have any concerns to pay vigorous rents. So purchasing a house is the best approach to eliminate abovementioned difficulty.
In conclusion, buying house is become an essential thing for a living by a majority of people; however, it will have some adverse repercussions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 288, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
...stock market shares, wasted to purchase an accommodation. In addition, living in repetitive plac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90082644628 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77851927964 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611570247934 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7602666216 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7142857143 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194761040305 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646690576305 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512050456485 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113549814241 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397297306217 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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