Some international companies are very powerful now and many people believe that it is negative development. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your reasons and relevant examples.
In the tendency of economic globalization and integration among nations, we are easy to see that multinational corporations are becoming a challenge to almost countries. Many people think that it has a negative impact to the development of their countries; I do not. A multinational corporation will bring many benefits to host country rather than its negation.
Firstly, a multinational corporation brings to host country their manufacturing technology by setting up many manufactures. By this way, they recruit many employees that need for their production. Moreover, the most important thing that local citizens could learn from them is the operation procedures and the technical skills. Then, by the movement of human resources market, these employees one more time could apply to local company. An example of this is Samsung Corporation; they planted some electrical equipment factories in Vietnam. The result is Vietnam has more tax for their development, and local people get a higher salary and reduce the unemployment rate.
Secondly, to perform some big projects such as nuclear power plant, refinery, or underground trail, the host country really need international companies. These companies have more experience to execute these types of project, which local company can not do it. Additionally, they have a huge finance base and good relationship with international suppliers that enable them could submit a cheaper price and finish project shorter. For instance, Hochiminh city is executing their underground trail by a Japan company. By using Japan technology, they believe that the project will bring an international quality to their citizens.
In conclusion, although a multinational corporation has some negative things such as monopoly but we can not deny their roles and these benefits that they give to host country.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'moreover', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.268138801262 0.247107183377 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.123028391167 0.155533422707 79% => OK
Adjectives: 0.123028391167 0.0946595960268 130% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0378548895899 0.0501214627716 76% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0630914826498 0.0437548338989 144% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0851735015773 0.122226691241 70% => OK
Participles: 0.01261829653 0.0403226058552 31% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.08832124776 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0315457413249 0.0326793684256 97% => OK
Particles: 0.00315457413249 0.00163938923432 192% => OK
Determiners: 0.0946372239748 0.0861772015684 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0220820189274 0.021408717616 103% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.01261829653 0.011925033212 106% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1840.0 1933.35771543 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 316.048096192 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.47887323944 6.12580529183 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.387323943662 0.374742101984 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.327464788732 0.28420135186 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.253521126761 0.203846283523 124% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.183098591549 0.137316102897 133% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08832124776 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.037074148 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598591549296 0.56093040696 107% => OK
Word variations: 64.9667530334 60.7387585426 107% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.9333333333 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1573782951 49.517814964 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.666666667 127.492653851 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.814263465372 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 51.6798122066 49.1944974215 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.6338028169 1.69124875643 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21727989106 0.332605444948 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0973599797236 0.102741220458 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0696167111263 0.0668466124924 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.48394934698 0.534860350844 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.16931774585 0.148594505496 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805278654131 0.134430193775 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493731449501 0.0742795772207 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.256851517385 0.324371583561 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0423000357748 0.0638462369009 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142031134396 0.228012699653 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193605827825 0.058150111329 33% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.41683366733 234% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 1.9629258517 306% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.