To this day and age, our entire world is seemingly moderated by advertisements regardless of where we are. Apart from exact promoting and sufficient ads, some unacceptable and immoral strategies have been used in product advertising. I do agree with the opinion that advertising methods nowadays are damaging present society with their misleadings.
For starters, advertisement is now playing a remarkably strategic role in competing and selling products among corporations. Besides most of the useful ads, some illogical and offensive content is commonly used as an intriguing method in advertising. These contents might include sexual or violent theme which targets on the human inherent covets. Moreover, advertisement gradually makes customers purchase goods that may be unclear, unhealthy, unnecessary, and expensive.
As a result of these harmful and offensive advertisements, customers and viewers can be negatively influenced. Supposing children with immature and fragile consciousness expose to sexual or aggressive advertising content, they will be prone to behave altogether what they have watched, which leads to many other dangerous impacts for the society. As for adults who get constantly bombarded with a wide range of ads including toxic ones only by flicking through a particular social media page, they must maintain their stand unless they are tempted to purchase a plethora of redundant products.
In conclusion, advertising including inappropriate content is still a big issue questioning the accurate awareness of customers, hence, the domestic politics of every country should take this condition into account and establish strict regulations for any corporations tending to use any unethical and improper type of advertising for benefits.
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing what do you think are the causes of problems and what measures could be tackled to solve them 89
- Buying things on the Internet such as books air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own kn 89
- In school and universities girls tend to choose art while boys like science What are the reasons for this trend and do you think this tendency should be changed 89
- Many goverments think that economic progress is their most important goal Some people however think that other types of progress are equally important for a country Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 78
- The bar chart shows the number of people who visited different museums in London Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, may, moreover, so, still, apart from, as for, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77777777778 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.142411857 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.708812260536 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.9598632598 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.090909091 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246126353522 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824982802264 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827184368399 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143581211515 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926933991587 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.54 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.89 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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