Nowadays, Some people have a propensity to research long-standing origin of an own family. This issuse as to whether it is a disadvantageous or positive impact has remained source of controversy. Personally, I would write some several reasons and the merits of development to this situation.
There has several underlying reasons for those thoughts. First of all, it could be the attributable to a sense of curiosity. When I adore someone or have a deeper insight into other people, you will want to profile their backgrounds through online platforms consisting of Facebook, Zalo,... as well as many new articles and advertisements that encourage ideology and convince people that it is necessary to know about their ancestors.Futhermore, Most people recently research family history to find out whether their ancestors had similar personality traits and to have a deeper understanding of their own indentities.
In my view, it has a good view to the positive development of each people's awareness and thinking. Youngsters will broaden their knowledge about their ancestors lived, fought with invaders to protect the country. And it is even more important for children to boost loyalty and pride with their ancestry. This also result in practical resonsibility to contribute efforts and strength to preserve valuble historical heritage. On top of that, family history can be a fascinating discussion topic whenever there is a family reunion on occasional festivals or events. Hown my grandparents struggled to bring up their offspring during the Vietnam War, simultaneoulsy, promoting the passion with History, which was given to research in most of academic schools nowdays.
In conclusion, I would totally side with those who think that it has a excellent merit and positive development with daily life when researching the ancestor's backgrounds or one's own family. Given that aforementioned reasons, I contemplate this is a positive modern trend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
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Suggestion: , .
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Suggestion: Futhermore
...necessary to know about their ancestors.Futhermore, Most people recently research family h...
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Suggestion:
...nderstanding of their own indentities. In my view, it has a good view to the po...
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Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, as to, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, in my view, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42434210526 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22981258247 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595394736842 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7424902143 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.933333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209297210675 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629200599895 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513600295846 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135640749361 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463495702726 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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