It is thought that people moving new location should undergo a new transformation in the their culture while some argues believe that immigrations need to keep their traditional culture by creating a distinguish community. this issue has aroused people’s discussion and i side of the later view.
On the one hand, it is apparent that there are some feasible reasons for this change. In new inhabitant, people have a chance to expose to different lifestyles and cultures so they expand their knowledge about the local public such as language, food and so on., They also have local neighbors and a new decent job at the local thanks to the communication with others. therefore, over a long time, they have tended to building new habits, which are well-suit for their life, creating a new way of life. Only by this way can people are likely to enter the local community and have a stable life as soon as possible.
On the other hand, thanks to keeping traditional culture , which is a national identity with a person, have been a number of beneficial. First, For economic perspective, when immigrations create their own community, receiving attention of local public due to differences. They are attractive visitors their location, introduce their culture and conduct business. For example, the Chinese come to Vietnam and construction their area, which has gained the love of teenagers, being willing to afford their products. There is the room for improvement their income as they are able to earn money. In addition to living the similar roof people is a great important to new immigrations. They are likely to receive the support of others in that community leading to easier overcoming the restriction of the stranger environment.
In conclusion, in the era of globalization, when the immigration has gained the popularity, both of views has their benefits. In my opinion, people, moving on other place should build a small community and store their traditional value culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0981595092 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89145954513 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546012269939 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8085495066 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.8 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260262684965 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853173476488 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669796674055 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177185506022 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069354289784 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.